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A Twist on the inside mind of Michael Myers (by Adrian)

Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2009 11:49 am
by adrian
this is more free style writing of mine. writing to where i dont' think about the next line, i just let the sounds of the key board carry my thoughts out :) i hope you all enjoy ;)



I call it a good, cold case of lust; with her hair laying the way it does, its a wonder I even got the nerve to bring myself back off the floor.
Some would call it insanity at it's most aggressive level. Sure it probably looks that way with all the blood.
Laurie, she's just faking it, aren't you?
Maybe I went a little over board with the knife. I thought I was taking it easy on her. I love her for Christ's sake.
I wonder what God would have to say about this. Would he understand? I bet he already does.
These are large hands, blessed hands, strong hands. These hands aren't just born everyday, no, these hands are God given hands with God given strengths.
Isn't that right, Laurie?
Still nothing.
I guess I must have taken it a little too far.
Poor Laurie, you were overwhelming. I can still smell you in the autumn air, the same way you did when I first saw you.
Laurie, I'll come back for you. I'll lay right there with you and join you with God. But first, I have some business to take care of. God fearing business. Hands business. Go to sleep Laurie. I'll be back home soon.

Re: A Twist on the inside mind of Michael Myers (by Adrian)

Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2009 6:38 pm
by Halloween_crazyy
Whoa, thats intense, in a good way!

Re: A Twist on the inside mind of Michael Myers (by Adrian)

Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2009 9:32 pm
by adrian
thank you... yea i really like this.... its got a really deep 3rd person sense to it.. one that follows the plot if we take out all the sounds and have his voice narrate the movie... it fits really... awkwardly, but fits lol

Re: A Twist on the inside mind of Michael Myers (by Adrian)

Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2009 10:05 pm
by adrian
hahaha i just read my comment, i'm sorry if i'm ramblin lol

Re: A Twist on the inside mind of Michael Myers (by Adrian)

Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2009 11:02 pm
by shanda
I love creativity. Don't you love the fact that you can express it here and people can really appreciate it! Way to go!

Re: A Twist on the inside mind of Michael Myers (by Adrian)

Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2009 11:03 pm
by shanda
I love creativity. Don't you love the fact that you can express it here and people can really appreciate it! Way to go!

Re: A Twist on the inside mind of Michael Myers (by Adrian)

Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2009 11:08 pm
by adrian
i do :) i used to post some things on the ole myspace blog but now this is the only site i keep up with honestly :)

Re: A Twist on the inside mind of Michael Myers (by Adrian)

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 8:54 pm
by Belladonna
Whew!
You just gave me huge goosebumps with this!

They and your story go right with the night here...it's a stormy, chilly Fall night!

That was awesome.

Re: A Twist on the inside mind of Michael Myers (by Adrian)

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 9:01 pm
by Spookymufu
adrian wrote:this is more free style writing of mine. writing to where i dont' think about the next line, i just let the sounds of the key board carry my thoughts out :) i hope you all enjoy ;) .
I do the same thing in the chat area when I'm in there all alone :)

Re: A Twist on the inside mind of Michael Myers (by Adrian)

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 9:13 pm
by adrian
Spookymufu wrote:
adrian wrote:this is more free style writing of mine. writing to where i dont' think about the next line, i just let the sounds of the key board carry my thoughts out :) i hope you all enjoy ;) .
I do the same thing in the chat area when I'm in there all alone :)
like yesterday :)

Re: A Twist on the inside mind of Michael Myers (by Adrian)

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 9:14 pm
by adrian
Belladonna wrote:Whew!
You just gave me huge goosebumps with this!

They and your story go right with the night here...it's a stormy, chilly Fall night!

That was awesome.
thank you so much :) i love writing. its my number one passion

Re: A Twist on the inside mind of Michael Myers (by Adrian)

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 9:16 pm
by NeverMore
adrian wrote:
Spookymufu wrote:
adrian wrote:this is more free style writing of mine. writing to where i dont' think about the next line, i just let the sounds of the key board carry my thoughts out :) i hope you all enjoy ;) .
I do the same thing in the chat area when I'm in there all alone :)
like yesterday :)
I was there for a bit! But then I had to go move a pool table. Two guys to move a pool table? That was dumb. Took us two hours just to get it into the truck. Didn't get home till almost midnight. Sure was tired this morning...

Re: A Twist on the inside mind of Michael Myers (by Adrian)

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 9:32 pm
by Spookymufu
adrian wrote:like yesterday :)
exactly